Email Thread on Editing a Keynote
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Email Thread on Editing a Keynote
From: Rita. To: Jon, Meryem. Subject: Epistrophe in the closing section. Does the repeated ending still point to the same moral claim? I trimmed one antithesis pair because the contrast felt merely clever.
Can we keep the anaphora on paragraph three without sounding like a chant? Please confirm you tested the rhetorical question before the final tricolon. Alex added that those figures survive only if the syntax remains plain beneath them.
Meryem noted that antithesis fails when the contrast is merely decorative. During revision of an email thread between co-authors revising a keynote, Meryem flagged chiasmus that reversed meaning instead of emphasis. Listeners heard of roads and schools and clinics and wages, and polysyndeton turned the closing argument into a accumulating weight in an email thread between co-authors revising a keynote.
A shared principle emerged:
