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A cynical Kyiv lawyer’s diary, retold at B1

Notes of a Snub-Nosed Mephistopheles Записки Кирпатого Мефістофеля

Volodymyr Vynnychenko

This is a retelling of Volodymyr Vynnychenko’s novel in simple modern Ukrainian, not the original: a MovaReader adaptation for readers who handle everyday Ukrainian and want a sharp psychological story about a Kyiv lawyer who doubts everything, even whether his friend’s son is his own child. In the catalogue it is B1: about 6,900 words in 14 chapters, with 11 words per sentence on average. Notes of a Snub-Nosed Mephistopheles (Записки Кирпатого Мефістофеля, 1917) is a novel about the ethics of private life, told by a man who tries hard to be honest with himself; the complete novel is also in the catalogue, at C1.

  • B1
  • 6 916 words
  • 1-2 hours

Will this text hold?

The average sentence has 11 words, the same as the catalogue’s B1 adaptation of Valerian Pidmohylny’s The City, and 6.2% of the words have 9 letters or more, close to The City at B1 (6.1%). The complete novel, also in the catalogue at C1, has shorter sentences (9 words) but 10.7% long words, the spelling of its 1920s edition and Russian quotations; here the language is standard modern Ukrainian. Two features to expect: the story is told in the present tense, as Yakiv’s diary (кажу, питаю, йду), and only 18 of the 155 paragraphs are dialogue lines, so most speech comes as reported speech with що or чи (каже, що…; питає, чи…). The vocabulary of pre-war Kyiv needs a tap now and then: візник (a cab driver), двірник (a yard porter), гімназія (a secondary school), заслання (exile), циліндр (a top hat). Sentences stay between about 10 and 13 words in every chapter. Hence B1. This is the catalogue’s assessment, not a certificate.

6 916
words
11
words in an average sentence
1-2
hours of reading

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What it is about, without the ending

Kyiv, spring, a few years before the First World War. Yakiv Mykhailiuk, a successful lawyer who was once a revolutionary known as comrade Anton, plays cards all night and likes to lead people to the top of the hill before he pushes them down. He offers his old comrade Nechyporenko, just back from exile in Siberia and hungry, three hundred roubles to talk a witness into lying, and Nechyporenko throws the offer back in his face. Sonia, the wife of his friend Dmytro Sosnytsky, forbids him her house, and every night Yakiv asks himself the question she will not answer: is her son Andriiko his child? He pushes the timid philosophy lecturer Panas Pavlovych to steal his own son from his wife, snatches a little boy, Kostia, from under a tram and begins an affair with the boy’s lonely mother, Klavdia Petrivna, that takes them to Crimea. Back in Kyiv he meets again the girl in the white hat from his bedtime tales, and to win a single handshake from her he stands outside her house for a night and a day. What happens next is not revealed here.

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Записки Кирпатого Мефістофеля

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X. Ніч біля чужого дому

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How the nickname is built

The paragraph explains Yakiv’s nickname: Мефістофель for his face and figure, and кирпатий (snub-nosed) for a nose that is in fact broad and flat, як у качки, “like a duck’s”. Notice вищий за нього, “taller than him”: за with the accusative is the everyday way to compare two people in Ukrainian.

Follow the clock

The night passes in short present-tense sentences, and time words are the signposts: Минає година, потім друга (an hour passes, then a second), уранці (in the morning), двічі (twice). Read them first and the scene falls into place: night on the steps, morning with the yard porter, a day of kvass and bagels.

Chapters

  1. IКирпатий Мефістофель
  2. IIСоня і Біла Шапочка
  3. IIIКазка під ковдрою
  4. IVДва гості
  5. VЖінка в чорному
  6. VIСосницький
  7. VIIЧий Андрійко?
  8. VIIIВикрадення
  9. IXКрим
  10. XНіч біля чужого дому
  11. XIПравда для Дмитра
  12. XIIШапочка судить
  13. XIIIЛист від Клавдії
  14. XIVКватирка

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The book stays free on every plan. Reader, €1 a month, removes the daily limit on words and sentences.

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With the Reader plan, MovaReader translates the whole sentence where single words leave the point unclear, as in Триста рублів для голодної чесності є сильним ударом, і я знаю це, “Three hundred roubles are a heavy blow for hungry honesty, and I know it”: Yakiv’s comment on the bribe he has just offered an old comrade.

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Before you read

Is this the original or a learner adaptation?

An adaptation, not the original text. It is MovaReader’s own retelling in simple modern Ukrainian of Volodymyr Vynnychenko’s novel Записки Кирпатого Мефістофеля (Notes of a Snub-Nosed Mephistopheles), first published in 1917. The plot follows the undated Kyiv-Leipzig edition of Ukrainska Nakladnia (1920s) on Wikisource, the same text as the complete novel in this catalogue at C1. What changed: about 73,000 words shrink to about 6,900 in 14 chapters with titles; Yakiv’s long reflections on morality, marriage and youth are cut to a few lines; the Dnipro steamer trip and several street scenes are dropped; most dialogue becomes reported speech; and the 1920s spelling, the Russian quotations and a yard porter’s half-Russian speech give way to standard modern Ukrainian. The diary keeps its first person and its present tense, and the events keep their order to the last chapter. The love scenes are told in a sentence and without detail, and the darkest scene near the end is told briefly. A few ethnic labels the narrator uses for people’s looks are left out.

Is there an audiobook?

No, there is no audio version of this book on MovaReader; the text is read on screen. Tap an unfamiliar word and its translation appears: here that will often be words of old Kyiv, such as візник (a cab driver) or двірник (a yard porter), and descriptive words like пласкуватий (flattish, said of Yakiv’s nose) or кватирка (the small opening pane in a winter window, the title of the last chapter).

Can I translate a whole sentence?

Yes: whole-sentence translation comes with the Reader plan. Most sentences read well word by word, so you will want it mostly for Yakiv’s verdicts on himself, such as Я хочу зробити добро, але скоро мені стає нудно, і з цього добра виходить зло, “I want to do good, but soon I get bored, and evil comes out of that good”, from chapter VI. Without the plan you can still tap single words.

How many hours does it take?

One to two hours for the whole book, at a learner’s pace with translation of new words, not a native speaker’s. The 14 chapters run from about 330 words (chapter IX, «Крим») to about 650 (chapter I, «Кирпатий Мефістофель»), so each one fits into a short sitting.

Where does the text get easier?

It is even. Sentences stay between about 10 and 13 words in every chapter, from 9.7 in chapter VII, «Чий Андрійко?», where Yakiv questions Sonia in short lines, to 12.8 in chapter XII, «Шапочка судить», with its argument about honesty. No chapter is markedly harder than the rest, so you can start anywhere the contents take you.

Will my place in the book be saved?

Yes. After you sign in, the reader remembers where you stopped and which words you opened. The contents on this page also open any of the 14 chapters directly, for example chapter X, «Ніч біля чужого дому».

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